I will definitely post it to my journal and probably over at atlantiskink.
My friend, the wonderful, bluespirit_star, has been helping me with the grammar and punctuation, which is quite frankly I am appalling at! As well as helping to keep John and Rodney voices/language in charcater.

Poor bluespirit_star, I don't think she realized how much help I needed! But she has been an absolute star (forgive the pun). *g*